will ya'all please help me with this one?

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  1. nonlogo

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    I'm hoping ya'all here will help me out with the design of the logo I've been trying to make here....???

    To me, it doesn't look or 'feel' quite right.. Any suggestions for me please??? and thank you in advance.

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    ok, I ended up doing this logo, and with the words dust2dawn I wanted and tried getting a sunset affect in the logo? Is that a good idea/concept? Is my sun too big? Anyways,, will ya please criticize this one for me please..>???

    and thanks again,

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    still working on this one,,,,and came up with this instead...??

    is this one still too busy..??

    as always, thank you ..........again :-)
     

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    In my opinion you have too much text. Some of it appears to be redundant. I would eliminate one of the "2 lines". So that you have just 1 "2" mention.

    -Ryan
     
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    hey Ryan,
    what about something along these lines then,.....???

    and the one with the star, what's your opinion with the two D's inside?? is it too much??

    and Thank You Ryan for your help...........

    oops, just noticed the two D's off to the side in the sunshine logo...that was an error there so please disregard those..??
     

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    your on to something with the name... i would try and drop the 2 down... the first thing i thought about was word play...

    Like Strawberry cake <-----Strawberry Short Cake :). See if you can implement sometype of nifty word play to make it standout and be rememberable.

    All black text is taking away from the rest of the logo. The sun may not turn out as well as you think. Can you print in color?

    -Ryan
     
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    nonlogo , on your first example if you add a space between Dust and the number 2 it will balance better. Both sides looking more equal.Remember that even numbers of letters makes a better circular text image.

    You might try doing the D smack up aganist each other and the 2 over the top of them.The attachment shows what a diffence adding just 1 space makes and what I mean by laying the letter on top.
     
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    hey, super........ and thank you! you guys are GREAT.

    I don't have any time tonight to play around with those logos..errr lol

    I managed to get behind in the areas I'm responsible for. Now it's time to get caugt up,,,again..

    I had to show and give ya'all my appreciation though...

    again, thanks you guys...

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    mornin'all,

    something like this maybe..??? will the white actually work? meaning the 2 and the two D's?
    of course thank you for your help again with this ...in advance. have a great day

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    this one's just not jumping out. Too much text i think...

    Ok, so if this is my logo, i change the black text to white, the 2 to something more vibrant, and eliminate the very bottom tag line and the sun. What about taking your DD and put it in the back as a watermark? Gray background is what is not setting this off. I would use professional cleaning services as my tag. But, this is your logo :)

    -Ryan
     
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    I don't think the color gray for a cleaning company is a good...it is kind of dingy looking to me.I think you can incorporate the name and D2D, how about something like this to go along with the rest of your text.
     
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    katie,

    very nice.
     
  13. meinrosebud

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    I like this one

    Here is my humble attempt.
     

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    i have an idea... i'll post in a bit. Nice logo by the way, meinrosebud.
     
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    Another Variation

    Thanks, here is another variation of the same logo.
     

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    can you add some color... I was able to work with yours, but i don't want to repost,since i removed your watermark.

    -Ryan
     
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    Color

    I was using Gold & Silver, what colors did you have in mind? My watermark is just habit.
     
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    i have an idea, but i'm tied up waiting on my program to repair itself... hard to explain my thoughts, but i'll post here as soon as i can...
     
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    Cool, when you can.
     
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    dang..!! looks great!! and makes me think I need to keep my name the same,,, nonlogo..LOL

    I want to show this one, and please let me know what ya'all think.. I ended up with this one this morning trying to do improve the main one I started with....( by me adding/showing this one I hope I'm not throwing anybody off, or anything else,,,

    I certainly do appreciate all of yoru guys thoughts, suggestions and ideas and the wonderful help!! You guys are great!!! Thanks a bunch...

    with this blue logo, I did have silver letters behind he black ones, but when i tryed re-sizing it to show ya'all on here, it didn't look right....

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