Tried B4, Trying again

Discussion in 'The Logo Creator Gallery' started by prevmedone, Mar 1, 2005.

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What do you think?

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  3. Try again

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  4. Potential

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  1. prevmedone

    prevmedone

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    Hello gang

    After seeing all the awesome creations on this forum I was almost too afraid to post, but nothing ventured, nothing learned.

    Thanks Marc for the excellent product.

    Anyway, this is my first attempt at this software and I am trying to creat a logo for my business automation product. I would truely appreciate you guy's opinions.

    Thanks

    Richard
     
  2. cybrnetico

    cybrnetico Staff Member

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    Good Work!

    Wow, that is a nice logo, I like the skull image :D
     
  3. perfectjewel

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    I think it's a great first attempt, but it's way too busy. The eye doesn't know where to look. I'd try to streamline it a little. I think you've fallen victim to what a lot of us do sometimes. You're trying to say too much in a small space.
     
  4. prevmedone

    prevmedone

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    Revision

    Did this tone it down in the right direction? I tried to remove some of the activity and less distracting.
     
  5. Mr Laughingbird

    Mr Laughingbird Staff Member

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    Ah!
    Beautiful prevmed!
    You're coming along way with the software :)

    I like both attempts, I like the second one best.

    Try exporting it as a full Jpeg.
    this may increase the quality!

    Nice work!

    - Marc
     
  6. willwinuk

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    I like it, but hard to read text.
     

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