please take a look at my company logo

Discussion in 'Logos and other Graphics reviewed' started by Wayne Walker, Feb 16, 2014.

  1. Wayne Walker

    Wayne Walker

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    I've redesigned my company logo, but after reviewing some of the logos here in the form I'm feeling that it could be better. could some of you please take a look at it and give me your impression and feedback? it would be greatly appreciated. RMH Logo2.JPG
     
  2. gcuneo2

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    Seems "busy" to me. The yellow border around "Hypnosis" is distracting. When I saw the word "Hypnosis" I thought "Hypnosis Reflective Mind" not Reflective Mind Hypnosis. I would highly recommend changing that busy looking background. The head graphic looks pretty neat, perhaps you should bring it forward- to the front of the graphic.

    I always think about "How will this look on a t-shirt or a flyer?" IS this image easily reproducible if sewn onto things like t-shirts or baseball caps?

    I cant tell what the graphic is used to fill in "Hypnosis".
     
  3. Wayne Walker

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    Thank you, good advice and yes I want to put on T-shirts and so on.
     
  4. gcuneo2

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    I'm not very artistic, but you've taken a big step-- asking for feedback. Hopefully someone with some crazy mad skills will come along and say "well why don't you....." keep up the good work man!
     
  5. MagicMark

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    I'm late posting to this thread but if you're still out there, Wayne, I have an idea. Some people use too much effects. Try backing off on the effects so you can concentrate on the words more. Wayne, you have a great logo here and sometimes less is more effective when it comes to special effects. Remember: graphic art must not only look good, it must be readable too (even at different sizes).
     

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