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Discussion in 'Help wanted with my design' started by ToxicDump, May 28, 2005.

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  1. ToxicDump

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    Hey, I made this logo for my company but i thought I would get some input before spending money on business cards and truck decals. Any opinion whould be great. Thank You.
     
  2. D RAT2

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    Could you post a larger picture of the logo it's kind of hard to see.
     
  3. ToxicDump

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    i will try but i do not know much about posting.
     
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    this should be better
     
  5. KD-did

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    Nice work...I just wonder how it would look with the bike flipped horizontally...
     
  6. ToxicDump

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    ok here it is flipped around
     
  7. Gravy

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    yes very good and I agree with Katie I think the bike should be facing the other way left to right. Since we read that way it seems more natural to have the element facing that way also.
     
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    Much better now it seems as tho the phrase pocketbikes is a tad to far to the left, I would move it very slightly to the right for more balance. An 8th of an inch or so to give you a reference. Mind you this is personal preference and subjective to what I feel when I look at it someone else may see it entirely differently.
     
  9. ToxicDump

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    you are right it is not in line because i just put it together quickly because i lost the original tlc file i made so i had to redo it
     
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    I like the font what is it called?
     
  11. KD-did

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    Great font...and it is perfect for your image.
     
  12. ToxicDump

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    the font is called pirate keg
     
  13. Shelly

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    Great looking logo you have there ToxicDump, Maybe the line spacing in "Big fun" "Small rides" need to be a bit further apart they seem to be mixing a bit.
     
  14. ToxicDump

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    what about this way?
     
  15. Shelly

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    Well I printed the image and it looked ok, However if you print it as a small logo then it tends to merge too much, Try it yourself.
     
  16. ToxicDump

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    ya, but i am thinking i need to find a way to tie the 3 pieces of the logo together instead of having them just floating there.
     
  17. MasterDesign

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    maybe a stupid question but, what are pocket bikes?
    MD
     
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    what about circled
     
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    Hi ToxicDump!

    Although your last image is more compact, I personally find myself trying to look at the Bike through the text. So my vote would be for tweaking your earlier effort.

    Oh ... okay, I see I didn't look at the next page. My bad. I like this one!
     
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