Discussion in 'Help wanted with my design' started by robyn42, Apr 11, 2007.
I had to design a new logo for our sister company. Please take a look and make it look great!
Wow - what would want to change it for? I like it just how it is. Very nice.
Don't just say that to be nice...I am a big girl, I can take it! I don't like how the A in American reads. Kind of hard to read..don't you think?
No really, I do like it. I do see your concern (slightly) about the A. I might try moving the swooshes up a little creating a fatter area for the circle for the letter A and tweaking the size of the background star. It also may help to decrease the font size of 'merica'. But, overall, the design is pretty solid to me.
Try and remove the star behind the A. Then enlarge the A and make it red. If you want a star in it then try and make the top if the letter i a star. Just a few ideas. I do like what you have going so far though. Good color choice. :D
Great suggestion Mac.
I hope you don't mind Robyn, but I've filed this layout away for future reference. For some reason, it just sticks out to me. I would not use it exactly as is, but the general layout I really like.
I'm not keen on the purple swoosh behind the red one, makes it look a bit old fashioned. I'd also lose the line between American Carpet and of Woodbury. Hope this helps it along!
I believe the swoosh behind is blue.
you always try this option just move it around a bit
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