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Discussion in 'Help wanted with my design' started by robyn42, Apr 11, 2007.

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  1. robyn42

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    I had to design a new logo for our sister company. Please take a look and make it look great!
     

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  2. Randy...

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    Wow - what would want to change it for? I like it just how it is. Very nice.
     
  3. robyn42

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    Don't just say that to be nice...I am a big girl, I can take it! I don't like how the A in American reads. Kind of hard to read..don't you think?
     
  4. Randy...

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    No really, I do like it. I do see your concern (slightly) about the A. I might try moving the swooshes up a little creating a fatter area for the circle for the letter A and tweaking the size of the background star. It also may help to decrease the font size of 'merica'. But, overall, the design is pretty solid to me.
     
  5. Chris

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    Try and remove the star behind the A. Then enlarge the A and make it red. If you want a star in it then try and make the top if the letter i a star. Just a few ideas. I do like what you have going so far though. Good color choice. :D
     
  6. Randy...

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    Great suggestion Mac.

    I hope you don't mind Robyn, but I've filed this layout away for future reference. For some reason, it just sticks out to me. I would not use it exactly as is, but the general layout I really like.
     
  7. neubreed

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    I'm not keen on the purple swoosh behind the red one, makes it look a bit old fashioned. I'd also lose the line between American Carpet and of Woodbury. Hope this helps it along!
     
  8. Randy...

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    I believe the swoosh behind is blue.
     
  9. Lamo1graphic

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    you always try this option just move it around a bit

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