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Discussion in 'Logo Designs' started by kittykatt, May 9, 2008.

  1. kittykatt

    kittykatt

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    Well I am hoping you will be gentle with me now hehe.

    What thinks?
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    Well its going for our forum which is located here
    www.mums-n-dads.com/forum to see the logo in action :image10-2:
     
  2. Borpean

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    very nice start... spread the text out a bit so you can read it. It's a little crunched particularly "fun"

    :)
     
  3. awalck

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    I agree with Borpean - nice start!! and about spreading the text that he suggested. The only other thing I would do is to rotate the stamp horizontally (90 degrees to the right) behind the second picture (2nd from the left) to make it look proportional. But, I like the angle that that picture is at. Good job!
     
  4. prototype66

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    I like it too, great start. Only thing I would do is (as stated) spread the text apart and perhapd use a higher contrasting color like the title.
    I hope I was gentle enough for you.lol
    welcome.
     
  5. kittykatt

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    Aww you were well enough gentle with me hehe, thanks all.
    Will do and will practice more.
    Thank you x
    Jess
     
  6. Chris

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    One thing I did notice is the words "Getting here is half the fun" needs a color change. I found those hard to read. You are off to a great start though. I like what you have done. Look forward to seeing more work in the future.
     
  7. 3DS

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    Yeah I agree w/ Chris on the slogan colors. I'd change the top gradient color so it doesn't make it disappear into your BG color. Try that.
     

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