Hi guys... new here =) // Pls critique my work!~

Discussion in 'The Logo Creator Gallery' started by vex321, Mar 29, 2004.

  1. vex321

    vex321

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    Hi guys

    I just started selling logos part time using this awesome software!!

    This is the first logo Ive sold and the customer was pretty happy..

    Let me know what you guys think and how I can improve my work!!

    Thx again!

    Best rgds
    Joe

    p.s. some of you guys have awesome skillz...probably make a lot of money huh? lol
     
  2. vex321

    vex321

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    hmm reattaching heh
     
  3. LogoCreek

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    Joe

    Welcome!

    First it is very hard to ready the Main line. Id suggest you make the .com smaller

    also the heart graphic needs to be moved down just a tad.

    great first logo!

    - Erik
    www.LogoCreek.com
     
  4. jjack

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    I would remove the .com from the top curve and put it under the heart or even under you other line (are you ready?). Give that shot and see how it looks.
     
  5. jamirae

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    looks good.. I agree with the suggestions.. but if you already sold this, can you still revise it for the client? :)

    anyhow.. the ring in the middle of the heart looks upside down.. can you flip it?

    keep up the good work!
     

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