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Discussion in 'Help wanted with my design' started by nonlogo, Nov 27, 2007.

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  1. nonlogo

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    ok, here's my third logo...and i'm wondering if this is simple, to simple, to busy.....not enough?


    and thank you very much

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  2. homesight

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    nice change of pace... are u sure this is the same person who did the teris logo :) Tagline should be a bit stronger, maybe not so wordy... Overall nice job, keep at it!

    -Ryan
     
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    hey homesight,, thanks....annnnnnnd yeppers, i'm the same person when I did the teris as I'am with this one to.....and i'm keeping at it as I'm logo-ing along
     
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    Hmm, i just realized your background letters spell TCT... I thought they were TOT... You may want to change that font , maybe an outline color.

    -Ryan
     
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    ok, how's this...?? I did have an ouline in green, so i added to the opacity

    the tag, what do ya think about this then...

    "get the clean team"
     

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    i have to think on the logo,,, the color of the font, or maybe the font in general isn't coming off too well... As for the tag,,, How about, "Get Clean, Get Teris Clean!" .. Something like that :) Acutally, how about T.L.C. House Cleaning... Your tag could be "Teris Loves to Clean"...
     
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    ok, I made some changes, how's this one rank?? too busy?

    .... what I was after was a circle at the right end, with a figure of a house shape inside. ended up choosing the sun, and couldn't find anything to make any rays coming off the sun to help emphasis the rise in the fonts/letters as they increased in size...........

    and thank you for your help
     

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    Nice crisp color combo. Not to busy but the full text needs a little push to stand out a little bit. Maybe by duplicating text making it white a placed so it is just barely seen on the edges. That will make the letters that are on top pop almost 3D or seperarte it a little and make it pop where they converge.

    To easily make rays coming off your sun Use the "Shape" embedded font and type shift and a number (3 to 9) for number rays. Tutorial on what is built into embedded "Shapes" font look at http://www.thelogocreator.com/tutorial_07.htm
     
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    I like the logo; however (and you knew I was going to say this), the "clean team" obscures the graphics, especially the "C". I would move THE CLEAN TEAM to a position just beneath the TCT type, enlarge the flower and have it come up between the letters C and T. Try this and see if it's better.
     
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    Just another thought. Tighten up on the letter spacing of "TCT".
     
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    hey you guys, just got in and getting caught up here,,,,

    i'm going to make those changes that was mentioned,

    KD-did, are you referring to the white being behind the text "the clean team" or the T C T ???

    annnnnnnd thanks you guys

    I'll be back ........... :-)
     
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    Behind "the clean team"
     
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    I've messed around and messed around tring diff things, ended up changing it pretty much altogether,...

    does this work better? Just wondering, those movement marks at the bottom of the dust mop, do they look ok...??

    or with me using two items in one logo, does it become too busy....?? fonts...are they okay with this??

    annnnnnnnnnnnnnd as always, thanks you guys...

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  14. homesight

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    Get rid of TLC House cleaning,, that makes it too busy,, I think that's a nice looking logo, although your mop looks a bit like a tulip upside down :image10-2: But, i really like it,, your getting better on every attempt... "Sweeping up the competition" for a tag line...

    -Ryan
     
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    or would it work better with the sun behind......??? also KD-did, I ended up putting a white letter behind every letter, I saved it as a template,and just now when I went to upload it, it wasn't in there...? so I must have done somethign wrong...errrrr

    and it took me quite awhile to do that, and now i'm out of time for logos this evening. Now it's time to go try my luck designing a brochure..........and thanks for all of your help and suggestions
     

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    and here's the others................???

    annnnnnnd I know I need to get rid of the TCT...just been playing with this one, learning a little bit more with the logo creator
     

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    Put that on a nice glossy business card stock and your good to go... minus the TLC of course... ewww, not the last one you posted,, that is not pretty,, colors run together...
     
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    ewwww he says..LOL... didn't like that one huh.... good thing I was ..messing around with the creator and trying to learn a little bit more then...LOL.....

    Which one were you referring to about putting on a bus. card, the one with the sunshine 'behind' the letters..??? and yeppers, of course withOUT the TLC.. you're not by chance meaning the TCT are ya..??

    annnnnnnnd thanks again
     
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    The one with the sun behind it very faintly...
     
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    ok, super!!! and thanks again Ryan for your help
     
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