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Discussion in 'The Logo Creator Gallery' started by LogoCreek, Dec 12, 2003.

  1. LogoCreek

    LogoCreek

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    any feedback?
     
  2. Lats

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    My first impression was that it looked a little rough, something unusual from you.

    A closer look shows your branding behind the Dans Bar bit was the culprit.

    Is there an apostrophe missing in Dans Bar?

    The 'R' in bar looks a little odd as well, is that due to shrinkage?
     
  3. jamirae

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    it's been a long week for me.. that dollar a pint sure looks good!! ;)


    yeah, I agree about the R and the apostrophe.. other than that.. I like!
     
  4. LogoCreek

    LogoCreek

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    Hey..

    I am with jamirae $1.00 a pint sounds GREAT! :banana


    Lats.. there is no apostrophe is that set of image fonts. and that is how thr "R" comes out.

    This is a very Rough draft. Matter of fact something I put together in about 3 minutes. (gotta LOVE TLC)
     
  5. Lats

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    Umm, so it does, I hadn't noticed that before. A few of the other letters have that lighter look as well - K, L & Q
     
  6. Carly

    Carly

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    i'm so new here, i don't know if i should be offering feedback, but i think more guys would go to Dan's Bar if there was a beautiful girl in that picture ;)
     

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