A couple logo designs

Discussion in 'Logo Designs' started by TSR, May 14, 2008.

  1. TSR

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    There both racing teams from oregon,

    Brittany Ray -- 12B

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    The Spaulding Motorsports, Unofficial Logo.

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  2. Chris

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    Nice job. I like the second the best. The first one is kinda hard to read.
     
  3. KD-did

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    Greeting from another Oregonian ... a coast resident .

    My preference is the cleaner 2nd design as well.
     
  4. prototype66

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    Welcome aboard. I like the 2nd one as well. Ditch the reflection and lighten the lettering color and the 1st one might be a little easier to read.
    Great work on both.
     
  5. TSR

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    Here is another - and thank you for the feedback! Team Raycing will benefit from it.

    Here is another for my hopefully future logo and website business i hope to start when I get old enough, what should i do?

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  6. Chris

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    That is actually a nice logo. One thing I would do is change the font or the color of the font you have now on the word "design". That word is hard to read. Maybe try the word"Sparks" with out the green outline. I think just having the A green would be enough. Well done though I do like this design.
     
  7. Lamo1graphic

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    i would loose the 2 swooshes and change the colour

    try making the "A" larger than your other fonts and then lay the "sp " >>>>rks"
    on to the A with design under neath if you want a element in there try playing around with the "ARKS"

    on your first twp logo`s if you are trying to a get a web 2 feel on the 128 racing there is a good tutorial in the forum that master design did check it out
    your second design is too dark and imhso does not gel together at all

    "if i get chance some time today i will try and do some examples for you"
     
  8. TSR

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    Hey Thanks, I will take your tips into concideration.
     
  9. TSR

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    Hey Guys, i took all of your ideas into concideration, i still might be using to much green though.

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  10. prototype66

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    No not at all, much better! I love green anyway, it looks alot better!
     
  11. Chris

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    I have to say the last design looks really good. I like the way you laid it out. Well done. Thanks for sharing!
     
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    Good job Speed Racer. You're off to a great start and already improving! Cool.
     
  13. Lamo1graphic

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    nice start but just try putting the text over the element at the beginning and put the creative media element and text below the main title
    i think that then you have cracked it,not bad for a first attempt "well done"
     
  14. TSR

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    Thanks Guys! I like the new one allot better too. I appreciate the good feed back.

    TSR
     
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    2 logos

    The second one is the best by far, the first is very hard to read. Nice job overall though.
     
  16. TSR

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    Hey, thanks allot! I appreciate all the feedback.

    I made another for this winters racing. Should we use it or not?

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  17. prototype66

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    Ya know there is an old saying....simple is better.
    This one is way too hard for me to focus on (IMO)
    too bunched together and too many design elements put together in a small space.
    Reduce the text size and use more contrasting colors ...or... maybe put the script text on a curve on the outside instead of inside and leave the other text just the way it is (give it some breathing room).The concept is great but its too cluttered...Just my two cents though bro, your doing really well for just starting out.Just fine tune it and look at it (on the screen) from a distance.......
     
  18. Lamo1graphic

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    the answer to this one is easy"not" sorry to be so blunt but as prototype as stated before me "it is far to cluttered"
     
  19. Lamo1graphic

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    here is something i had a go at
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